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2014年11月13日雅思写作考情分析

2014-11-18

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2014年11月13日雅思写作考情分析

         南京环球教育姜姗姗

A类小作文

图表类型

地图(动态图)

作文题目

conference  center 地图变化

图片



思路

It is noticeable that  the whole area for indoor activity has been expanded over the 10-year  period. The most significant change is that the initial garden was  replaced by inner sports.

Inhabitants can enter the reception through a door as before. In the  center of the community center, there is a hall which can accommodate 100  people at the same time, and this is also the same as before. However, the  large storage room north to the hall, has been divided into two parts  today, namely, a smaller storage and toilets.

The coffee bar is no  longer a part of the community center. Instead, an office equipped with  toilets has taken its place. Also, four offices in the northeast  corner and the storage opposite to the kitchen disappeared. A newly-built café  area occupies this area and is open to all visitors currently. Finally,  the kitchen and parking lot are still in use.

类似旧题

The diagrams illustrate the changes in  the community center before and after the decoration.20141025

A类大作文

作文题目

Research shows that overeating can be just  as harmful as smoking. Thus the advertising of certain food products should  be banned, as cigar is banned in many countries. Do you agree or disagree?

题型/题材

Argumentation+食品

类似旧题

Many people believe that counties should  produce food for all population eats and import food as little as possible.  To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2011.2.26)

In many countries traditional foods are  being replaced by international fast foods. This is has negative effects on  both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2011.6.23)

Scientists say that junk food is harmful  to people's health. Some say the way to ask people to eat less fast food is  to educate them, while others say education does not work. Discuss both sides  and give your own opinion.

写作思路

开头段:

众所周知,吸烟是有害的,但是最近的一项研究揭露了一个不为人知的情况:吃得太多和吸烟一样有害。这个研究结果引起了人们的关注,有些人认为为了防止出现过度饮食的负面影响,应该像禁止吸烟一样禁止某些食品的广告。

主体段一:通过广告宣传食品确实会增加人们对食品的消费,加大了过度饮食的风险。尤其是对垃圾食品的摄入增加会导致很多疾病,不但是个人健康衰退给国家的医疗系统增加负担。因此,国家可以控制一些垃圾食品的广告宣传,或者要求在广告中明示过度食用可能产生的危害。

主体段二:

吸烟被禁止的原因在于不光对吸烟者的健康造成损伤而且对被动吸烟者的危害更大,最严重的可能造成公共安全的危害,如引起火灾。与吸烟不同,过度饮食只会对自己健康造成伤害不会危及他人或者社会,这是个人的选择,所以不应禁止食品广告。

主体段三:

食品广告给消费者,生产商和经济发展都带来了很大的好处。

消费者:更全面具体地了解各种食品的信息,有利于做出正确的选择

生产商:增加收入

经济:消费会刺激经济的发展 

总结段:

吸烟被禁止的最主要原因是对他人造成伤害,而过度饮食是自己个人的选择,不会危害他人。此外,食品广告不是过度饮食的主要原因。个人有权利选择自己的饮食方式。


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