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地图

作文题目

The  map shows the changes of a park since 1980

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写作思路

开头段：改写原题。

The  two maps illustrate how the park changed since 1980.

主体段一：描述1980年公园的情况：有两扇门在公园的西侧和南侧（Two  gates were located in the west and south of the park.) 一条小路将两扇门连接起来。（A  path ran from one gate to another.)

有些花在公园的西南角和东南角（on the south-east and  south-west corner of the park)

On  the other hand, 一些树在西北角和东北角（on the  north-east and north-west corner of the park)

西边的花儿与树儿之间有个pond，周围有些benches

主体段二：描述现在公园的情况：两扇大门消失（be removed or  demolished) 而道路从公园中心向各个方向延伸（extend from the center to  surroundings)

花儿消失（replaced by bushes），树木减少,东北角新增了barbecue和tables,而东南角新增了操场.  Pond and benches remained.

总结段：道路更宽敞，而且人们在公园的娱乐活动更多。

作文题目

Some  people prefer to help or support directly in the local community for people  who need it, however, others prefer to give money to the national or  international charities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

题型 / 题材

讨论双边（社会类）

类似旧题

06.06.10:  Some people prefer to help or support directly in the local community for  people who need it, however, others prefer to give money to the national or  international charities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

写作思路

开头段：introduce the topic and give a general answer to the question。背景：一些人认为应该直接援助当地需要帮助的人，而另一些人觉得应捐款给国内外慈善组织。观点：我认为，这两种方法应该结合使用。（When it comes to ways to help those in need, some people tend to  provide direct help to those in local communities while others choose to financially  support national or international charitable organizations. In my opinion,  these two ways should be combined to reach ideal effects. ）

主体段一：give reasons why giving direct support to local community is  important. 私人援助能有效帮助那些有迫切需求的人们（an efficient way to help those with urgent needs)例如，生病急需输血的孩子，会得救。（If some local  residents happen to be able to donate the same type of blood, the child’s  life can be saved.)此外，私人援助还能避免机构腐败现象的影响。（Supporting directly in local community can to a large degree  reduce the risk of corruption of certain organizations.)

主体段二：give reasons why donating money to charities also plays a  significant part. 一些复杂问题，例如医疗与教育相关领域的援助以捐款给慈善组织的形式更有效（because ordinary people cannot offer the best cure for some  serious diseases as well as the poor education. With funds from charities,  experts can keep working on their research and school facilities and teachers  can be promised.)

总结段：repeat or summarize the opinion in a different way。综上所述，私人援助与捐款给慈善组织均发挥着重要作用，而将两种方法相结合能更好造福于社会。

To  conclude, both ways can solve some problems to some degree. However, the  combination of individual participation and financial donation makes greater  contribution to society.