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小编: 2052014年2月12 日雅思写作考情分析
南京环球教育教研中心 李佳佳
A类小作文
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作文题目 | .Course satisfaction-percentage of first-year students rating *** as “very good” | ||||||||||||||||||||||||
图片 | Course satisfaction-percentage of first-year students rating *** as “very good”
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写作思路 | 开头段:改写原题 主体段1:Economics专业打分项中,teaching and tutor rank first and second,accounting for 95% and 92% respectively. Lower proportion, 62% and 59% belong to Pre-course info and resource 主体段2:Law 专业中,最高项是resource(other),followed by tutor and pre-course info. 最不满意的teaching 主体段3:Commerce专业中,对课程满意度较高,pre-course info 和teaching 满意度比例一样,representing 95%.tutor and resource(print) follow behind, making up 93% and 86% .最低的是resource(other) 结尾段:Commerce 专业的学生打分比其他两个专业高,其中五个打分项 中和教学相关的前三项打分较高。 |
A类大作文
作文题目 | Some people think that age limit for driving should be increased in order to make driving safer.To what extent do you agree or disagree?. |
题型/题材 | Agree&Disagree/ 交通类 |
类似旧题 | 类似旧题:(2006.12.09)Severe punishment is the best way to improve road safety. To what extent do you agree or disagree? |
写作指导 | 开头段: Lead-in Sentence背景句 观点句:Solving this problem is likely to need more than a simple increase in age limit for driving . 让步段:Top sentence: Some people hold that it is better to increase the age restriction for driving. Supporting sentences:Admittedly, 提高age limit to some extent can improve road safety。However, 道路交通安全 并不是只由于驾驶人年纪轻造成的。提高 road safety 需要其他更有效的方案。 主体段1: Top sentence: raising the awareness about road safety in the general public is an effective way to improve road safety. Supporting sentences: 很多驾车人道路安全意识都很淡薄,比如 醉酒驾车,开车打手机这些现象屡禁不止, 对自己和他人都造成很大的安全隐患(pose potential threats to...),而这个原因导致的交 通安全问题并不是年纪轻造成的。 主体段2:Top sentence: improving the road officers’ efficiency and the public road infrastructure is another effective method to solve this problem Supporting sentences:交警执勤效率低甚至negligence尤其在一些 繁华地段,事故高发区。若效率提高,交通 相关部门多设置安全警告标示牌,改善道路 安全设置,规划更合理些都可以improve road safety.
结尾段: 重申我的观点+兼顾反方观点:提高路面安全需要大众和政府相 关部门的通力合作而不仅仅只是increase the age limit for driving. Only by doing so can (路面交通安全问题才能得到更有效的解决)
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