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小编: 27562015年1月29日雅思写作考情分析
南京环球教育蔡甜甜
A类小作文
图表类型 | 流程图 |
作文题目 | 工艺流程 |
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写作指导 | 1. 开头段:进行题目改写,注意流程图时态 The flow chart given illustrates how … 2. 主体段:看清每个步骤,找出起始步骤,从stage 1开始描述,每个步骤不能省略,直到stage 3。注意被动语态和对流程图的一般步骤描述和常见的时间顺序连接词,此次考试可以参见玻璃回收,同属于工艺流程。 3. 结尾段:总结流程图。 |
A类大作文
作文题目 | Nowadays, both scientists and tourists can go to remote natural environments such as the South Pole. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? |
题型/题材 | 利弊类/文化旅游类 |
类似旧题 | Nowadays, both scientists and tourists can go to remote natural environments such as the South Pole. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? (2012.07.3) 100%相似 国外出现过此题(以色列雅思真题) |
写作指导 | 解题思路: 1. 开头段: (引出背景),转述题目。 Scientists are not the only few attracted to Antarctic as every year tens of thousands of people are also going there on a short tour of the ice, the water, the wildlife, the solitude, and the homeland of penguins. The hordes of visitors--by South Pole standards-- can pose a threat for the vulnerable areas at the bottom of the globe.
2. 引出科学家去自然环境旅游的利处: (科学发展固然好,尤其对于环境的研究以及全球变暖的控制有明显的优势,但个别发展可能会对当地的生态环境产生破坏) It is understandable that much of scientific research on Antarctic is devoted to unraveling the mysteries of the universe in general and evaluating the influence of global warming in particular. And this must be considered as a positive development since scientists are making efforts to look into even the remotest natural environments such as South Pole.
3. 游客去自然环境旅游的利弊: (了解当地的生态环境,野生动物的习性,但是游客的某些行为会对当地的环境造成破坏) That tourism has increased dramatically on Antarctic in recent years is anything but good news to both environmentalists and animals alike, including penguins. As international tourism grows, many passengers can afford an expedition to the realm of penguins once in a lifetime.
The case with tourists is of course different. Although the time that tourists spend visiting Antarctic is relatively short in duration, comparatively high is the impact that each visitor has on its fragile eco-system. Besides, the manner in which they get there, either by ship or by plane, is polluting the last frontiers on earth. That is to say, more tourism, more contamination.
4. 总结段:给出个人观点,提出利或是弊,结尾处稍加建议,以彰显文章升华。游客和科学家应该去偏远自然环境旅游,但是要注意不要破坏当地环境,注意环境的保护。
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