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小编: 5655月17日雅思写作考情分析
南京环球教育蔡甜甜
A类小作文
图表类型 | 地图 |
作文题目 | 城市地图两年对比 |
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写作指导 | 1. 开头段:进行题目改写 The map given illustrates the development of … from … to… 2. 主体段1:According to the first map, in 1950, 此时的描述可以从空间顺序上写,在这个城市的东边,有一片business district,中间有两个公园,被一条河隔开,在最西边有个harbor。城市的两边有homes 主题段2:As can be seen from the second chart, 我们采取“先拆后建”原则,把原先有的事物存在的改变先说,比如原先左上角的哪些homes消失了,取而代之的是更多的business district,公园消失了被取代了,新建了一条foot path,以及sporting facilities。 3. 结尾段:该图表现了从1950到现在城市的发展变化。 |
A类大作文
作文题目 | Children can learn effectively from watching television. Therefore children should be encouraged to watch television regularly both at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree? |
题型/题材 | 同意与否类/媒体类 |
类似旧题 | 1. Some people believe that time spent on television, video and computer games can be beneficial to children. Others believe this has negative effects on a child. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. (2008.1.10)
2. Studies suggest that children spend more time on watching TV than they did in the past and spend less on doing active or creative things. Why do you think this is the case? What measures and methods can be used to tackle it? (2010.3.27)
3. A report indicated that many children between 7 and 11 spend too much time watching television and or play video games. How does the problem affect the children, their families and society? What measure can be taken to control it? (2010.9.25)
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写作指导 | 1. 开头段:在现当代社会,电视作为20世纪的新发明,在日常生活中成为了一个不可或缺地工具。由于电视的重要性,有人持有这样的观点,认为应该鼓励孩子们在家或是学校经常看电视因为通过电视孩子们能积极有效地从中学习。在我看来,这种观点并不十分合理。
2. 主体段1(让步段):It is understandable for these people to think so, because it is really the case that 电视,作为一种非常有效地信息传递工具,可以告诉孩子最新的资讯和世界科技的发展,例如新的计算机技术,克隆技术,这些能够刺激孩子的想象力,鼓励他们进行相关的实验,从而孩子们可以从中学习到很多书本以外的知识。Furthermore,一些电视节目,如探险类以及地理类的电视节目扩展孩子的知识面,满足孩子的好奇心,开发了孩子的智力,让孩子更多的了解世界以及从中学习如何解决困难。
主体段2(反驳段):However, reaching that conclusion does not necessarily mean the same as assuming that children should be inspired to watch television regularly at home and at school. Initially, 并不是所有的电视节目都适合孩子观看,如violent movies。很多孩子还小,以至于缺乏明辨是非的能力,看到这些节目,很容易进行模仿,从而导致一些严重的后果甚至犯罪。In addition, 学生长时间对着电视保持同一个姿势(sedentary),注视屏幕,会导致很多健康问题,如肥胖问题,尤其是对视力影响很大,。Finally,长时间地看电视会让学生上瘾,沉迷于电视节目中,因此分散他们的注意力,从而影响他们的学习。
3. 结尾段:在我看来,尽管电视能够让孩子了解最新资讯以及扩充孩子的知识面,但是经常性的看电视所带来的一些消极影响是不容忽视的,所以,为了给孩子提供一个健康的学习环境,it is 老师和家长 that 帮助孩子合理地挑选适合的电视节目并指导孩子进行适当地观看。 |