第一印象确实重要，因此雅思写作马上抓住考官吸引力是一件很重要的事情，需要琢磨。

　　环球教育(原环球教育)小编提供关于如何吸引写作考官目标提供以下的见解和建议：

　　一、吸引考官的题目

　　这次南京环球教育就通过对下面这个例题和几篇例文的对比讲解来探讨下雅思写作的开头方式。题目如下：

　　Throughout the history, male leaders often made the society more violent and conflicting. If women governed the world, it would be a more peaceful world. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give an example to support your idea.

　　南京环球教育针对以上的题目，展示以下不同的开篇方式例文，从简单到复杂，从低分到高分。

　　二、无法吸引考官的欠缺

　　3句式 rephrase the title + quote others' opinions + make one's own point clear

　　1.用一个好的句式 Recently there has been a hot debate in the public over the issue whether the world would be more peace if women governed the world.

　　2.用动词变化和连词连接观点 Some people believe that women would be better governors while other people couldn't agree.

　　3.提出自己的观点，如果现在还没有明确的观点，可以虚晃一枪 I will analyze the two opinions and then give my own point of view.

　　这属于最基础，但是南京环球教育认为不太能吸引眼光，只能得基础分。

　　三、吸引写作考官的升级

　　由于上面一篇文章并没有显示出创造性，所以容易被考官识破，只能得到5到5.5 分，实在是模板痕迹太过明显，所以南京环球教育认为，大家可以考虑升级。

　　南京环球教育建议，可以从world governor 或者man/ woman作为切入点，避免直接谈到话题，而是“后退一步”从话题的部分内容中切入

　　It's generally agreed that women are more considerate and patient than men. However, would the world be more peaceful if women were the governor of the world? Personally, I believe that women are better governors than men.

　　Undoubtedly, women and men should be treated equally. However, when it comes to governing the world, it seems that most of the governors are males just as the word "history" indicates history is "his story", not "her story". In my point of view, women would make better governors if given the chance.

　　南京环球教育的吸引雅思写作考官注意力的建议还管用吗?