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小编: 4042014年4月11日雅思写作考情分析
南京环球教育教研中心 李佳佳
A类小作文
图表类型 | 线+柱 |
作文题目 | CO2 emission by vehicles |
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写作思路 | 开头段:改写原题 主体段:三种交通工具 showed an upward trend from 2.5 million in 1980 to 4.5 million in 2000. Cars and trucks 在这20年中 CO2 emission 都呈现了一个上升的趋势。Cars从2000m3增加到4500m3.Similarly, trucks从2500m3增加到4800m3。而buses基本保持持平(rise and fall rather evenly, averaging out at 1500m3. 结尾段:三种交通工具CO2排放量的差距在20年中在拉大。 Cars and trucks是主要污染源。 |
A类大作文
作文题目 | Old people who need employment have to compete with younger people. What problems will be caused? And what are the solutions?. |
题型/题材 | Report/ 老年类 |
类似旧题 | 类似旧题:(2006.10.09) Companies should encourage old employees (55 years old) to retire, in order to give opportunities to the new generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree? |
写作指导 |
开头段:1. Lead-in Sentence背景句 2. 概括problems:young people losing jobs + older employees undergoing more work pressure 主体段1: Top sentence(问题1):加大年轻人的就业压力。. Supporting sentences:Compared with older people, 年轻人一般相 对缺乏经验,老年人通常经验比较丰富,能 更好的解决工作中的problems and challenges 。 主体段2:Top sentence(问题2): older people are highly likely to face higher pressure at work. Supporting sentences:.相对比年轻人,老年人have limited vision or courage to tackle fresh-new issues.对于企业 的创新和发展来说,年轻人more energetic and open-minded,这些更有利于企业的 sustainable development.
主体段:3:(Solutions)1. 政府应为缺乏经验的年轻人(less experienced young people)多提供积累工作经验的机会,创造提供更多 的就业机会(create more employment opportunities) 2. 企业可以create training programs to get elder employees familiar with changes in work 结尾段:尽管老年人的竞争会lower young people’s chances of finding a job or put a strain on their daily work,政府和企业可以为两者多创造机会, 完善培养机制,让老年人和年轻人充分发挥出各自的特长优势。
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