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2015年05月30日雅思写作考情分析
南京环球教育 袁毅琳
A类小作文
图表类型 | 柱状图 |
作文题目 | The chart shows the average class size in 6 countries in 2006 and compare them with world average class size. |
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写作思路 | 开头段:改写原题。 The bar chart describes the average class size of primary and lower secondary schools in South Korea, Japan, UK, Mexico, Denmark and Iceland in 2006 主体段一:South Korea, Japan, Denmark和Iceland均是secondary school的class size比较大。其中South Korea不管是小学还是初中都是the biggest class size of all,均超过世界平均水平。Japan排在第二,亦都超过世界均值。On the contrary, Iceland had the smallest class size among all countries, whose class size was smaller than that of world in both primary and secondary schools. 与其他三者不同的是,丹麦中学班级规模远大于小学。 主体段二:On the other hand, UK和Mexico都primary school的class size较大。To be specific, UK不管是小学还是初中班级规模都比Mexico大,其中UK的小学规模甚至超过了world average size 总结段:韩国是所有6个国家中班级规模最大的,远超世界平均值。而另一方面,大部分国家相比于小学,初中班级人数更多。 |
A类大作文
作文题目 | Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their countries. What are the reasons? What can change the negative attitude? |
题型 / 题材 | Report(旅游类) |
类似旧题 | 06.05.20: International tourism has become a huge industry in the world. Do the problems of international travel outweigh its advantages? |
写作思路 | 开头段:introduce the topic and give a general answer to the question。背景:许多人认为国际旅游业的快速发展会产生负面影响。观点:这种担忧可能与环境破坏以及文化差异有关。(Many people hold the opinion that the rapidly growing international tourism has bad effects. I think the concern may be connected with the environmental damage international tourism may cause and cultural differences between tourists and locals. )
主体段一:give reasons why some people think international tourism is harmful. 国际旅游不可避免的会破坏环境(damage the environment),比如国际游客在观光点扔的垃圾(the litter left by irresponsible international tourists at places of attraction) 另外,国际旅游业可能导致游客不尊重当地文化(disrespect for the local culture)从而引发冲突(conflicts) 主体段二:list measures which can help improve the situation. 针对游客的教育宣传活动(environmental education campaigns directed at international tourists)以及对游客污染行为进行罚款(fine against polluting behaviors); 此外,在网站以及旅游指南的帮助下,了解当地文化(With the help of websites and guidebooks, tourists can fully understand local culture)
总结段:repeat or summarize the opinion in a different way。综上所述,国际旅游业可能导致环境与文化方面的问题,但采取相关措施可以解决这些问题。To conclude, international tourism may lead to some environmental and cultural concerns. However, with proper methods, these problems can be avoided. |