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2017年6月24日雅思大作文高分范例

2017-06-26

来源:环球教育

小编:长安 151
摘要:

  相信上周六参加考试的考生们,肯定还对这道大作文题目心有余悸。审题仔细的考生们甚至开始不相信自己的眼睛了。千真万确,从分类角度讲这是一个非常少见的考题。但是仔细分析之后,其实也不算难。另外,此题在2014年10月02日就和各位考生见过面。

  此后,在环球教育杨亮老师的面授课上,会把这道题拿出来和大家分享一下。毕竟,这么诡异的题目在题库里面不算多见。


  原题如下:

  Government funding for universities should only be provided as scholarships for the best students. Other funding of universities should come from student fees and private organization. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 20170624

  题干中的确表达了两个观点,而且这两个观点都需要考生在文章里面讨论,缺一不可。看上去是一个辩论型题目,其实写法和双边型题目如出一辙。

  Funding issues of universities, usually known as non-profit organizations, are always worth debating, such as the utilization, distribution and rational source of the funding. Some people support that the fund provided by governments can only be utilized as scholarship for best students, and meanwhile tuitions of students and donation from some private organizations are the only two acceptable sources of funding, besides government.

  开头段,简单的背景加点题。由于题干中有两个观点,因此点题时要面面俱到。

  For one thing, there is no denying that using government funding as scholarships to inspire students who really work hard is beneficial. Nevertheless, function of governmental funding should not be confined to this. This is to say, the funding should be more multifunctional instead of providing scholarships only. For instance, another main function of funding from governments is for financially supporting students from low-income families who consequently cannot afford their study or living in universities, no matter whether they are able to be good students or not. Besides, some significant researches that no sponsors like to aid also ought to be subsidized by funding of governments.

  主段一,主要回应题干中的第一个观点。因此,这段重点讨论了政府给大学的钱该怎么用。

  For another, in comparison to a toneless funding structure where all funding of universities can only come from governments, tuition of students and private organizations, a more flexible and various financial source is badly needed. Donations from some companies and individuals should also be accepted, by which universities can own sufficient funding to support researches and provide students a fertile study and living environment. Notwithstanding, commercial activities of universities should not be encouraged or must be under strict supervision and regulation, as on no account can the principle of universities of to be non-profit originations be changed.

  主段二,回击题干中的第二个问题。重点论述,大学的钱该怎么来。

  In a word, of many funding sources, government funding is the most significant one function of which ought to be maximized, covering scholarships, students aid, research and so forth. And meanwhile, a various and sufficient funding pool is regarded as a precondition supporting multi-functionalization of funding for universities.

  结尾段,仍然是总结全文,重述立场。

  这种辩论型提问,但是题干中却有两个不同观点的题目其实在题库里面并不多见。每年考试也只有那么一两个,因此考生对此不用过于紧张,其写法可以参考双边讨论的写法。

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