来源:环球教育
小编:长安 153 雅思写作本身不是一件很难的事情。简而言之,就是直抒己见。看见一个题目,根据自己的理解或是经验把自己的观点有逻辑地阐述出来。但是,就是这样看似不难的一件事情许多同学往往觉得无法做到,尤其是对于一些不关注时事新闻的同学或者羞于表达自己的同学。
往往当他们看见一个题目的时候,就会觉得无话可说。不管这位同学的目标分数是几分,如果没有相关知识的储备,要想写出一篇高质量的文章也是无稽之谈。鉴于此,环球教育(原环球教育)高飞老师建议同学们在准备雅思考试的过程中,注意素材的整理,尤其留意身边发生的时事要闻。
大家可以看一下这个题目:
People in both developed countries and developing countries are richer for economic growth. Studies show people in developing countries are happier than before while people in developed countries are not. Analyze the reasons and what can we learn?
乍看题目觉得好像并不难写,但细致想来,怎么能把这个“大”问题简明地解释清楚才是拿分的关键。
那么,对于发达国家这帮无病呻吟的人们来说,他们活得不开心其实就是不知足呗。但是,对于我们这些烤鸭来说,就得分析一下他们面临的社会原因。
当然,对于活在社会主义国家而且还是发展中国家的我们来说,面临各种各样的问题,我们的生活也是有不开心的。但是按照题目偏偏要回答why people in developing countries are happier than before,以及从中学到的了什么。
联系实际,也许刚刚结束的美国大选会给我们一些启发。我们见识了川普的“魅力”,更重要的是,通过他和希拉里的辩论,让我们了解了“美帝”人们活在“水深火热”之中的。于是乎,对于我们这篇文章,我们或许可以这样思考:
The era has evolved to the stage where people attach more importance to their happiness. However, some people believe that citizens living in less developed countries tend to be happier and satisfied with their lives. In this essay, I intend to explore the sources of this problem along with some possible suggestions.
For developed countries, their social wealth has been increasing, and accordingly social problems become severe and obvious. The recently ended presidential election 2017 in the USA sets a good example. Some problems as racial discrimination, gender equality, unemployment and immigration are the key points of contention. It therefore is no wonder that the public feel dissatisfied with their society. Meanwhile, it is a natural result of economic development. During the post-war period of economic expansion in 1980s, American citizens enjoyed an extremely material success. However, when a country's economic strength reaches a peak, what the morrow has in store for them is a gradual fallback, which undoubtedly results in a huge psychological blow. After all, citizens' feeling of happiness is tied closely to their country's economic development, especially when the economy is somewhat stagnant.
By contrast, developing countries are in the process of wealth accumulation. The fact that citizens in developing countries are busy in increasing their own wealth and improving living standards exists commonly. Many social problems consequently are hidden, which makes them feel happier. What is more, it is exactly because citizens in developing countries are on the path of accumulating wealth that the material success or improvement of life bring them great satisfaction and happiness.
Therefore, developed countries afford their developing counterparts lessons that merit attention, from which those developing countries can avoid some zigzags during their development, while governments in developed countries should actively grapple with problems that perplex their citizens rather than evade those issues.
上面的文章只是通过素材的留心与积累速写一篇文章的例子,旨在说明注意素材的积累对于雅思写作的临场发挥是大有裨益的,环球教育老师也希望以此为例对同学们在雅思大作文写作时的思路有所启发。