来源:环球教育
小编:长安 157前篇我们解释了阅读文章里的一些句子如何可以和雅思写作的题目联系在一起,下面南京环球教育(原环球教育)张依甜老师具体说说怎么把这些句子写到作文里面。
Topic:Why are a variety of languages and cultures disappearing nowadays? How to prevent this phenomenon?
1)很多同学在写"语言消亡"的时候一直使用的是native languages are dying的表达,这个表达是对的。但是,我们的评分标准中LR对词汇资源的要求其中一项是多变,文中为我们提供了很多种"语言消亡"的表达:
lost for words/languages
on the danger list
language vanish/disappear
the extinction of language
endangered languages
开头段可以这样写:
Never before has the planet's linguistic diversity shrunk at such a pace.(倒装句开头,吸引考官注意)Many minority languages are on the blink of extinction/on the danger list(陈述事实少数民族语言处于灭绝的边缘)and we are heading for three or four languages dominating the world. There are many reasons contributing to the disappearance of some native languages.(引出下文)
2)主体段开始具体写语言消失的原因,几个原因的内容刚才我们都讲过了,这里我们看看如何把这些原因写入段落中。
Admittedly, it is not necessarily these small languages are about to disappear. What makes a language endangered is not the number of speakers, but how old they are. When the next generation reaches their teens, they might not want to be induced into the old traditions and native languages. If teenagers are reluctant to inherit the native language, language will lose its inheritors consequently.
先让步说不是所有的小语言都会灭绝,然后用因果论证的方法摆明青少年不学语言和语言灭绝之间的关系。
Quite often, governments try to kill off a minority language by banning its use in public of discouraging its use in schools, all to promote national unity. Sometimes, the national policy gives children no choice but to embrace new culture.
However, the deadliest weapon is not government policy but economic globalization.(承上启下)Some linguists doubt that the globalization is the reason which stands in the breach to be responsible for languages losing. The globalization process integrated different modes of language into a common language. People cannot refuse to speak this international language if most commercial activities are in this word.
三个原因之间要用相应的连接词,让文章更有条理性。
3)按照题目的要求,结尾段的内容锁定在如何预防,当然再写如何预防之前我们可以写一下为什么要阻止语言消失。
The fading away of certain languages represents a loss of data for the study of languages and their evolution, which relies on comparisons between both living and dead languages. When an unwritten and unrecorded language vanishes, it is lost to science. At the same time, the patterns and connections we look at the world may be structured by the linguistic habits of our community. The loss diversity may deprive us of different ways of perceiving the surroundings.
语言丧失意味着失去某种语言及其进化过程,也就意味着科学研究无法进行. 同时语言多样性的丧失对我们观察这个世界的方式也有所影响。
Overall,language is intimately bound up with culture, so it may be difficult to preserve one without the other. A growing interest in cultural identity may prevent the direct predictions from coming true. The key to revive native language and foster language diversity is to motivate later generations to learn ancestral tongue and improve the appreciation of domestic traditions and customs.
如何预防语言的消失这里总结了两点,保护文化特性,鼓励年轻人说母语。
这篇文章就是根据剑4的阅读改头换面出来的,其中有些搭配偏难,篇幅也偏长,同学可以根据自己掌握的程度对文章进行改动,切忌全篇照抄!
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