雅思写作对于很多学生来说是一大难题，不知道如何下笔，不知道如何遣词造句。下面环球教育（原环球教育）戴友涛来用雅思考官范文解析一下雅思作文该怎么写。

　　本篇文章选自剑桥雅思4Test4 Task2 考官范文

　　题目：

　　In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

　　审题：在学生行为方面，学校面临严重问题

　　问：原因和解决方案

　　Model Answer：

　　Poor student behaviour seems to be an increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this.

　　分析：

　　Poor student behaviour seems to be an increasingly widespread problem （话题引入）and (衔接) I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this.(点出造成现象的原因)

　　话题词汇：

　　poor student behaviour 学生的不良行为

　　good/bad behaviour 良好/恶劣行为

　　social/sexual/criminal behaviour 社会/性/犯罪行为

　　modern lifestyle 现代的生活方式

　　healthy/unhealthy 健康/不健康的生活方式

　　busy/hectic lifestyle 繁忙的生活方式

　　stressful/affluent/comfortable/extravagant/glamorous/lavish紧张的/富足的/舒适的/奢侈的/多姿多彩的/铺张的生活方式

　　其他词组或句式：

　　more and more students=(an/the) increasing（形容词性） number of students

　　more and more important= increasingly（副词性） important

　　sth seems to be an increasingly widespread problem sth似乎是个越来越广泛的问题

　　A be responsible for B A要对B负责（背锅）

　　In many countries, the birth rate is decreasing so that families are smaller with fewer children. These children are often spoilt, not in terms of love and attention because working patients do not have the time for this, but in more material ways. They are allowed to have whatever they want, regardless of price, and to behave as they please. This means that the children grow up without consideration for others and without any understanding of where their standard of living comes from.

　　分析：

　　In many countries, the birth rate is decreasing（探本溯源的原因是持续下降的出生率） so that（导致结果） families are smaller with fewer children（结果是家庭体量变小，孩子数量变少）.

　　These children are often spoilt（以上社会现象所导致的结果）, not in terms of love and attention（缺爱缺关注） because（导致孩子被溺爱的原因） working patients do not have the time for this, but in more material ways（不缺物质）.

　　They are allowed to have whatever they want, regardless of price, and to behave as they please（被溺爱后的表现方式）.

　　This means that the children grow up without consideration for others and without any understanding of where their standard of living comes from.（被溺爱的后果）

　　话题词汇：

　　the birth rate 出生率

　　the death rate 死亡率

　　the annual crime/divorce rate 年犯罪率/离婚率

　　family=household n. 家庭

　　spoil/overindulge v. 溺爱

　　love and attention 爱与关注

　　working parents 工作的父母

　　in material ways 在物质方面

　　behave as they please 按照他们喜欢的方式（我行我素）

　　child(单)-children（复数）

　　grow up 长大

　　consideration for sth/sb 对某事/某人的顾及

　　standard of living 生活水平

　　When they get to school age they have not learnt any self control or discipline. They have less respect for their teachers and refuse to obey school rules in the way that their parents did.

　　分析：

　　When they get to school age they have not learnt any self control or discipline.（线性逻辑至入学时孩子的表现1） They have less respect for their teachers and refuse to obey school rules in the way that their parents did.（线性逻辑至入学时孩子的表现2）

　　话题词汇：

　　get to school age 到入学年龄

　　self control or discipline 自控力或自制力

　　have less respect for sb 对某人缺乏尊敬

　　refuse to obey school rules 拒绝遵守学校的规矩

　　Teachers continually complain about this problem and measures should be taken to combat the situation. But I think the solution to the problem lies with the families, who need to be more aware of the future consequences of spoiling their children. If they could raise them to be considerate of others and to be social, responsible individuals, the whole community would benefit.

　　分析：

　　Teachers continually complain about this problem（以上现象所造成的结果） and（衔接后面的内容） measures should be taken to combat the situation（需要解决方案）. But I think the solution to the problem lies with the families（是家长的责任）, who need to be more aware of the future consequences of spoiling their children（呼应上文讨论的问题）. If they could raise them to be considerate of others and to be social, responsible individuals, the whole community would benefit（探讨可行的方案，如果...那么就可以...）.

　　话题词汇：

　　lie with sb (to do sth) 是某人的责任（去做某事）

　　spoil their children 溺爱他们的孩子

　　raise children 抚养/培养孩子

　　responsible individuals 有责任心的人

　　其他词组或句式：

　　complain about the problem 就某件事情抱怨

　　measure should be taken to combat the situation 应当就解决问题而提出解决方案

　　the solution to the problem 这个问题的解决方案

　　be aware of 意识到

　　future consequence 未来的后果

　　to be considerate of sb 体谅某人

　　sth/sb would benefit 某事/某人将会受益

　　Perhaps parenting classes are needed to help them to do this, and high quality nursery schools could be established that would support families more in terms of raising the next generation. The government should fund this kind of parental support, because this is no longer a problem for individual families, but for society as a whole.

　　分析：

　　Perhaps parenting classes are needed to help them to do this（解决方案1，提供家教课程给父母作为指导）, and high quality nursery schools could be established that would support families more in terms of raising the next generation（解决方案2，高质量的幼儿教育学校）. The government should fund this kind of parental support（政府应当对以上方案提供支持）, because this is no longer a problem for individual families, but for society as a whole（解释为什么要提供支持，因为这不但是个人问题，也是社会问题）.

　　话题词汇：

　　parenting classes 家庭教育课程

　　high quality nursery schools 高质量的幼儿教育学校（幼儿园）

　　raise the next generation 抚养下一代

　　parental support 父母的支持

　　individual families 个别家庭

　　其他词组或句式：

　　in terms of 在...方面

　　fund sth 对sth给予财政支持

　　以上就是环球教育老师对雅思范文的举例分析，希望对大家有所帮助！